I can’t put my finger
On this feeling.
But you sure
Do express it better
Than I.
I will leave the expressing
To you.
You seem to be
In your feelings
I will seat back
And bask at the
Words that come
To me from you.
They are like
The fresh cool breeze
That blows on you
On a hot summers evening.
When the sun starts
To set, the wind comes
To cool the heat of
The day away.
You are my cool
Summer breeze.
After a long day
I relax as your words
Flows through my system.
You are like the chilled drink
That one must drink
In order to feel at ease.
I pounder on what
Your physical presence
Will be like.
Like a phoniex I rise.
Knowing each day ends
With you.
Though the day burns me
I still rise with God
As my guide and
You at my side.
Hi Victoria, how are you doing?
I was wondering if you would like to be featured on the Penable YouTube Channel to share some poetry writing tips.
Kindly let me know what you think!
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I’m doing well. Merry Christmas and a happy new year 🎉😊. How was your Christmas? I hope your family are all healthy and well?.
Wooow no way? Is that you yeah? You’ve got a YouTube channel? I’ve only been gone a couple months and your exploding in many ways congratulations wooooooohhhhhhh 2021 is looking amazing for you. (I’ve got to hype you up first 😅)
I would love to do that. Like that would be amazing. But tell me what exactly you want me to do and how long so I can draft something up. 😁
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Yes, thank you so much, we’re all well 😊
🤗Aw, thanks, I’m so glad!
So if you could just prepare a short video, under 10 minutes, sharing some poetry writing tips, or do you have another topic in mind?
You’re such a brilliant writer and I’m so excited to start this project with you! 😊
Also, would you like me to share the link to your website?
Thank you so much! You can mail me at phoenix@penable.net
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Sorted. Thank you for your comment it means a lot. I’m very pleased and honoured to be starting your project with you.
I will take some notes on what tips I will share. I also will try and make one during the video.
Yes. Please share the link to my website. I will email you.
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Okay, no problem 😊
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When do you want the video by?
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By the end of next week, if that’s alright?
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Alright 💯💯
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Great poem, thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you for reading
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